Here, I wanted to use my inca man in a memorable fashion. Keith Haring was brought up to my attention, so i decided to incorporate his style to bring my inca man into a more recognizable scenario. Please give me some suggestions/comments/feedback.
Keep consistency with your line weight bring in your typeface. it looks cut off too big for the frame and crowded. open it up some more Follow you logo- It's clear clean and direct. There are too many lines. that pattern is doing what your business cards were doing at first. You and your diagonals hehe jk but serious. -iwh
I agree with pattie with making the line weights all the same, and making the background less busy. I you should also try the headline in the font you used for the logo. its all starting to come together well though!
looking back at you stationery, i think that light green or orange you used would work very well. they are very nice and calm, but with the images on top it would probably work.
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Keep consistency with your line weight bring in your typeface. it looks cut off too big for the frame and crowded. open it up some more Follow you logo- It's clear clean and direct. There are too many lines. that pattern is doing what your business cards were doing at first. You and your diagonals hehe jk but serious.
-iwh
YOU CAN DO IT MANG :D try using your logo color palette first. Then add other accent colors
-iwh
ok cool, thanx patti :)
I agree with pattie with making the line weights all the same, and making the background less busy. I you should also try the headline in the font you used for the logo. its all starting to come together well though!
looking back at you stationery, i think that light green or orange you used would work very well. they are very nice and calm, but with the images on top it would probably work.
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